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Old June 5th, 2007, 08:51 PM
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Title: Ten Years On
Author: BellaU / © Michelle Schoofs
Category: Movie Based
Rating: PG
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Ten years on
His solitary prison still holds him
Frozen and empty
Far from her embrace
Her loving spirit

The pounding of his heart
Only an echo in his ears
So distant
That it seems nothing now
But a dream

The wind encircles him
As they ride toward the dawn
The flash so subtle to his eyes
Yet so vivid as he searches
The beach beyond

A smile graces his face seeing her there
His redemption and reward
For a duty well served
The promise of a goddess
For a love long denied

The hard boards of the deck
Replaced by the sinking sands
That pulls at his boots
Worn and weary like his soul
He moves towards liberation

He can smell her scent
Heady with life
Feeling the soft skin as her fingertips
Grazing his skin like fire
Tracing the longing deep inside

She speaks his name
Her voice like bird song
On a cool misty morning
He closes his eyes
Dizzy from the promise held within

He drops to his knees before her
Unable to breathe
Her presence a potent drug
Forcing the cold chill to pass
With each waking moment

His arms wrap about her legs
His head resting against her body
The heat building between them
Passing through his soul
Washing the desolation away

The small boy at her side
His smile so familiar and caring
Peace in his touch
As his small hand rests upon his shoulder
Pushing the burdens of the years away

A gasp passes his lips
And the tears he’d long refused
Trail down his cheeks in rivers
As his heart beats once again his chest
The curse now shattered

Ten years on

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Old June 18th, 2009, 12:50 PM
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This is wonderful... I luv it!!! keep up the good work!!
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Old June 18th, 2009, 03:03 PM
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I read it just now and *GULP*

Beautifully written... really...





I still wish it was like that...
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Old June 18th, 2009, 04:31 PM
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Bella is a fabulous poet, thats for sure.
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Old June 18th, 2009, 10:39 PM
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That is wonderfully written. *sighs* thank you for sharing!
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Beautiful work Bella. It is so lovely to see more of your poetry!!!

The emotion in this is so strong yet I can feel that deck and the sand as a part of the whole.
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Old June 19th, 2009, 02:54 AM
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I can just imagine this in the movie!
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Thank you Bella, this is beautiful.

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