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Old June 5th, 2007, 10:06 PM
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Poem: One Day..

Title: One Day
Author: Andnolewen
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Category: Movie based ( Pirates of the Caribbean, At World's End)
Rating: G
Warnings: None, just ..a tissue or two...

A Poem I wrote after seeing At World's End, and it's heartbreaking ending...


One day, before the sun sets into the sea
One endless day handed to us by a touch of destiny
Seagulls echo our desperate cries and silent plea
For this one day to last an eternity.

Just this one day let us be lost in time
Destroy all the cruelty of fate
One last time our hearts beat together in perfect rhyme
For love, it is never too late

This one day the joy of my life comes true
My body set on fire but my heart is heavy with it’s burn
You tell me not to fear the years without you
Your kiss dies on my lips with the promise, one day you will return

Loneliness finds me, but for eternity our love will live on
I will keep your heart safe with me while you are gone
One day, one day your ship will come
Until then I’ll keep a weather eye on the horizon


Tonny, May 2007

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Old June 5th, 2007, 10:13 PM
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stop me , please.... I can´t control my tears today ...
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Old June 5th, 2007, 10:20 PM
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Oh, that brought some tears ... very nice!

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Old June 5th, 2007, 10:54 PM
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Oh, wow, Tonny. That was beautiful. Great job.
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Old June 6th, 2007, 12:10 AM
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Tonny, I read your poem with into the wallpaper that Nel did to it, and let me tell you that the image and the so well written poem of yours made me get all teary, I clicked about the ending of the movie reading it, now I realise how sad it actually is.

It is wonderful to see that you not only draw so beautiful but you can also write fantastic things

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Old June 6th, 2007, 12:21 AM
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That's lovely, Tonny.

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Old June 6th, 2007, 12:29 AM
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Beautiful, Tonny !!! I was caught up in the emotion of the poem almost as much as in the emotion on the screen. Great work !!!
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Old June 6th, 2007, 03:33 AM
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*sobs uncontrollably*

Why do you do this to me? I'm already a big mess of tears.

You've really captured the look in their eyes with those words. 'Tis beautiful.

*wails*
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Old June 6th, 2007, 04:23 AM
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Wow...that was powerful. *is near tears* I'm almost crying trying to write this.

Beautiful work! Marvelous! You have a great talent.
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Old June 6th, 2007, 06:21 AM
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Wonderful poem.
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Old June 24th, 2007, 10:49 PM
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Thank you so much girls

After seeing awe 6 times it;s still
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Old June 25th, 2007, 10:06 AM
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Tonny I missed this when you first posted but have already read over it several times. It is just wonderful so full of yearning, so sad..
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Old June 25th, 2007, 03:02 PM
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I have just seen AWE again today and I agree it expresses perfectly that twisting ache of sadness. Perfect! Is very well done, you have a gift for words. The FD has to have a Captain.
*goes off to wipe another tear* everytime I see that bloody film..jeez.
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Old August 15th, 2007, 02:23 PM
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Very beautiful Tonny!
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Old August 24th, 2007, 09:44 AM
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WOW what a beautiful poem tonny

You really have a GREAT talent honey

looking forward to read more
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Old August 27th, 2007, 05:27 PM
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Tonny, that was very beautiful.... It's always been three months since I saw At World's End for the first time, and still I get tears in my eyes whenever I think about how that movie ended. Never in my life have I been touched so much by a movie (except maybe Titanic) and this poem expresses just the right things. Very, very touching...
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Old August 27th, 2007, 06:03 PM
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stop me , please.... I canīt control my tears today ...
me too.
Girl,that's wonderful.Great got,I love it!!!
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