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Old May 12th, 2007, 02:39 PM
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[Poem] You took everything off of me - Troy (PT)

Actually I wrote this in german but translated it for you girls. Hope you like it a bit.

Title: You took everything off of me
Author: Meneander
Category: Movie Based (Troy)
Rating: PT
Warnings: no warnings





All women love you
But I feel nothing anymore
Once I loved you too
You were my companion and friend
But you took too much off of me

You took my home off of me
While you were only thinking of yourself
You took my god off of me
While your selfishness brought them here
And you took the love off of me

Once I had been in love
With a man who only saw the woman in me
Once I’ve felt
What it meens to be loved
But you took him off of me

You took my feelings off of me
While you only followed your hate
You took my heart off of me
While you just hadn’t stopped
And you took the love off of me

Every night I cry his name
But he will never come back
Every night I cry your name again
But you won’t listen to me
Every night I see us back there again

There I kneeled infront of you
Begged you for his life
There I saw your hate
Saw your arrows flying
Saw him taking his last breath

You took the pleasance off of me
All I feel is sorrow
You took the life off of me
While you were taking his
You took everything off of me



~ Mene ~

Last edited by nuit; May 21st, 2007 at 08:45 PM.
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Old May 12th, 2007, 03:54 PM
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great to see more poetry mene- and translated too- wow!
Some very powerful emotions there.
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Old May 13th, 2007, 08:18 AM
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Lovely work and like Nuit said such strong emotions running through...it must be very hard to write and then translate. Thank you for sharing this
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