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Old April 12th, 2005, 11:16 PM
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"Perfect" a poem by Tonny (G)

Title: Perfect
Author: Tonny
Category: Original Work
Rating: G
Warnings: none

[CENTER]Perfect

A name, refreshing and mysterious
Your clothes dashing, sometimes hilarious
Wrapped up in colours of all kind
Dazzling so bright, it makes me blind.

Dark hair, short, long, wavy or curls,
Ever changing, as your beauty further unfurls
Your voice is gentle when it speaks the words of your soul
Then again boisterous and loud, beyond all control

Inscrutable, but innocent as a child
Sensitive, poised, still indomitably wild
Luscious, sparkling, yet incredibly sweet
One glimpse enough to sweep me off my feet

Deep brown eyes, and even if they are blue
They give away a heart that is true
So many forms you are shaped in
Impossible to choose, hopeless to begin

Daring, dashing, cheeky or goth
It all matters not
It is as I suspect
You are absolutely perfect



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Old April 13th, 2005, 03:01 AM
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That is so good!
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Old April 13th, 2005, 04:42 AM
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That is such a lovely poem and so....well....perfect. I guess when you've got the perfect subject, the inspiration comes naturally. Great job! Thanks for sharing.
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Old April 13th, 2005, 10:05 AM
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That is really good. Thank you for sharing with us!
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Old April 13th, 2005, 11:24 AM
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Thank you so much PirateAngel, Theoriginalvicki and my twinnie Serein for your lovely feedback.

One can only write such things with a perfect muse at hand, right?
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Old June 1st, 2010, 01:04 PM
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*shakes head*

I HAVE to visit the poem corner now. So many pearls that I missed.

That's absolutely OUR man, Tonny. 'Perfect' description.
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Old June 1st, 2010, 01:24 PM
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I hadn't read this before (in fact I thought you had just been inspired by the pictures recently). It is beautiful and sums up everything I've been feeling looking at the pictures and reading about his new roles, anticipating what is soon coming our way. It still amazes me the things his voice and smile, curls and twinkling eyes make me feel. I was telling my sister there were new pictures of my boyfriend and how great he looked and she says "Who's your Boyfriend?" , I remind her "Orlando Bloom!" Her response "Still him?" Yep, still him.

Thanks Tonny for allowing us to use this for the graphics challenge. I can imagine the lovely walls that will be created.
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Old June 1st, 2010, 10:02 PM
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Thank you girls!!
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I hadn't read this before (in fact I thought you had just been inspired by the pictures recently).
Thanks Tonny for allowing us to use this for the graphics challenge. I can imagine the lovely walls that will be created.
You are most welcome and I am so excited to see what everyone comes up with.
I wrote this poem back in 2004 somewhere...omg can you believe this!!
And that was even before I ever saw the perfectness myself LOL!

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lovely poem tonny
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Old June 2nd, 2010, 11:35 AM
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ah yes, that's our boy. Well said Tonny - very sweet poem about a very sweet man. Can't wait to see what wonders we see to accompany it.
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