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Old September 2nd, 2007, 10:17 AM
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Oh Ki, as you know, I don't "do" poetry (other than silly stuff), mainly because I don't 'get it' (I'm a pleb, I know) but that was just touching and powerful and yes, I actually got it! Well done. A wonderful lament for what should have been and wasn't - loved the Justice para and this:

Now as it was always
Wasted lives and hopes
still we suffer
Children of Ireland
Deep despair and probably struck a chord with me, because I'm big on hope - and I could sense none in those final words.

Excellent Ki.

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